Anyone wanna be a dollface?

 Cross-posted to hp_betas 



I need a beta. I have one - sometimes - but she's just so busy that I hate to bog her down with this stuff.

I'm working on a story now that I'm really excited about, so while I have no problems giving it some love, I need someone to give it some more refined loving.

I would prefer someone who could be with me for the long-haul, but I understand that most of my flist is made up of writers that are incredibly busy themselves.

I'm basically looking for any help that I can get be it SPAG and/or Brit-Picking. (As well as personal opinion to plot holes, character design, dialogue, and anything that seems generally off.) 

If you aren't familiar with my style of writing, you can find it here: example.

Pairing: H/D (Of course)
Premise: Slytherin!Harry - No Voldemort relation, no overt character bashing, no evil!Dumbledore.
Genre: AU
Word Count: Prologue: 6.4k


(Admittedly, this story is NOT any of my fest or auction fics. ...shiddlesticks.)